We've placed our scenes in order. Now that we have a line of narrative, plot holes emerge. I've started to document them.
My BIG Questions about the Show:
-What makes the circus audience afraid of Caligari and Cesare?
-How can we make it clear that the city has gone to sleep? Can oil lamps switch on in the city streets?
-Narrator Witches and Title Card Projections step on each other's shoes. How do we divide the work between these devices?
-Which scenes will the Flower in the Girl's Room bloom? In which scenes will it wilt?
-Where does Alan go to die? Can we find his body? Can he be dead in the madhouse?
-What are Policemen and Father R afraid of in Caligari's room?
-What information does Father R find in Caligari's study? Can it destroy Caligari? How do we show that?
-Can the Father R/Caligari showdown be cooler? Can they attack each other?
-Cesare exits with Girl-Soul USL through the city in the dance scene. Why does Cesare go back to kidnap the Girl-Body?
-Right now prostitutes discover an unconscious Girl-Body twice. Can we have a new entrance for the gals in Death of Cesare?
-What does the Battle of Good/Evil scene accomplish?
-What are Cesare-Soul, Girl-Soul, and Sophie doing in the Madhouse scene?
-How does Father R and Policemen go mad?
-How do the prostitutes go mad?
-What is Sophie's dramatic arc in the show?
What will make people afraid of Dr. Caligari? His powers of hypnotism do not extend beyond the world of the play. We need to introduce a villain that will follow the audience home after curtain call.